poe-ms/try

this is my online "journal" i am keeping for my creative writing class. i'm mostly a stream of consciousness kind of guy, so the bulk of this will be in that. or things that i thought about through out the day that i thought could be worked into creative writing. my other tumblr is here.
March 17
“ What just happened to us
I think I fell asleep at the wheel
We must have fucked up the car real good
Because I can’t feel anything at all
I’m super sorry but my eyes got really heavy
And the last thing I remember is your smile

chad vangaalen - “1000 pound eyelids”

i think this paints a very sad and draining image of an actual car crash. i specifically like the like “because i can’t feel anything at all.” the music fits perfectly - the somber horns and drawn out melody.